Hey there Alanna! Your story gave me the chills. It was so descriptive and as I first read the first sentenced it already sounded like something out of a movie. I noticed that your spelling said "check" instead of "cheek" so maybe edit more? Other than that you're story is amazing. Keep up the creativity! Looking forward to read more and more of you're interesting stories.
Hi Te Morehu, Thank you so much for the compliments and feedback! I will make sure to double check my work next time! I can't wait to see your blogposts and comment!
I am so amazed from the quality that you put in your work. I love all the details and im sure the story made me little freaked out, hope to see more of your beautiful work.
Hey there Alanna!
ReplyDeleteYour story gave me the chills. It was so descriptive and as I first read the first sentenced it already sounded like something out of a movie. I noticed that your spelling said "check" instead of "cheek" so maybe edit more? Other than that you're story is amazing. Keep up the creativity! Looking forward to read more and more of you're interesting stories.
Hi Te Morehu,
DeleteThank you so much for the compliments and feedback! I will make sure to double check my work next time! I can't wait to see your blogposts and comment!
Your Welcome,
Alanna
Anytime! Keep it up!
DeleteWow Alanna,
ReplyDeleteI am so amazed from the quality that you put in your work. I love all the details and im sure the story made me little freaked out, hope to see more of your beautiful work.
Sincerely, Tanisha
Hi Tanisha!
DeleteThank you so much for the compliments! I love hearing feedback from you all and I can't wait to see your blogpost!
Your Welcome,
Alanna
hi alanna i am really disappointed at this i thought you could do better
ReplyDeleteJUST KIDDING I LOVE IT I LOVE ALL OF IT SORRY IF I TRICKED YOU BUT I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT
ReplyDeleteHi Demi,
DeleteThat was a really funny joke! Thank you for the compliment, I can't wait to see your blogposts!
Your Welcome,
Alanna