In class, one of our Daily 5 rotations is Work on Writing. There is a super cool website called The Literacy Shed. The Literacy Shed gives heaps of exciting story starters and pictures that you can write about! I tried one out and here is what I wrote!
Hi Alanna! I love the descriptive words you used, and the way you talked about what you could smell, taste, etc. Maybe next time you could put it into paragraphs to make it easier to read. i look forward to seeing more of your work! From Olivia at Otaki College.
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